Once upon a time there was a pretty butterfly and an old shack. The butterfly flyed around the old shack every day to check on it. But when the butterfly went back there again there was a blizzard and it got reced.
Hi Patience, I can really see the butterfly cared about the old shack. Is there a reason why the butterfly always wanted to check on the shack? Maybe you could tell us how the butterfly felt when it found out the shack was wrecked.
Hi Patience, well done on doing 3 sentences that have a couple of juicy words. Next time you should try to add some more juicy words to describe the shack. From Sam
Hi patience I really like your best work that you show me. Keep on working hard patience it might be even more harder. From Zoe
ReplyDeleteHi Patience, I can really see the butterfly cared about the old shack. Is there a reason why the butterfly always wanted to check on the shack? Maybe you could tell us how the butterfly felt when it found out the shack was wrecked.
ReplyDeleteHi Patience, well done on doing 3 sentences that have a couple of juicy words. Next time you should try to add some more juicy words to describe the shack. From Sam
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