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Friday 17 August 2018

Writing Narritive


One day at Pt England beach there were two people they were alone and there names were Zac and Jackie.They both were wondering why no one was at the beach but they still went for a swim.The only thing that Zac and Jackie didn’t know that there were three sharks in the water and that’s why no one was at the beach.Zac went in first and then Jackie.The water was nice and calm and then Zac and Jackie thought they saw a fin but luckily that was just an old sheet to a bed that was wrapped up in a piece of cardboard.All of a sudden there was a boom it was the shark speeding towards Zac and Jackie.Jackie and Zac didn’t see it but they heard it they thought it was just fireworks.Then Jackie said in the day time it’s to early for fireworks and then they saw a big mouth crashing down into the water.Jackie got out but Zac didn’t Jackie tried to get Zac but he got pulled down and his leg was gone by the time he came back up.The other three sharks were gone out of nowhere Zac had enough strength to get out well he was doing that Jackie was looking for some help because she left her phone at home.
To be continued

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