Little green Riding Hood

WALT: write a narrative using correct punctuation and sentences.

Once upon  a time there was a girl called little Green riding hood she lived with her stepmum and her real dad. One day little Green riding hood wanted to go see her aunt  and she took some maori bread. She set off to her aunts. She went through the jungle in through the bushes and there's aunts house. She walked into her aunt's house and said aunt were are you her aunt replied back with in here my dear. In the living room she went sitting there was a tiger and aunt. She said here you go aunt so maori bread. Thank you my dear I have a new pet that doesn't look like pet aunt said little Green riding hood aunt said back to her don't be scared dear come and pet it. She went to pet the tiger. The looked bad to little green riding hood the tiger said I am going to eat you. She said to her aunt that tiger is so so bad oh I mean it said it was going to eat me. So her aunt said for the tiger to get out the tiger told them that if he ever sees them again he is going to eat them. Luckily they never came past the tiger ever. THE END

Task Discripions: This week we are learning to rewrite a story this one is Little Red Riding Hood